Scott's Comments

  • Homepage is ok, but unbalanced. It’s a 3-column section, but only 2 columns are filled. I suggest you make it a 2-column section, and make the text larger (not too large, but larger, more readable). That will balance the page better. Nice use of links!

    • Done, 2-colum section added, and text made larger at 36pt

  • “Working sessions” picture page. This should be more descriptive: working on what? It looks like several different workshops are shown here – give each picture a caption explaining what event, when, etc. Same with all pictures – describe them each with a few words.

    • Done, pictures put in 3-column, each having a caption describing them

  • “History of Oshie Village” – reusing photos from other pages – it would be better to have different pictures (maybe when you get home?). The text is all at the top, while the pictures continue. Maybe make the text larger, or put more space between the sections of text, so that they go down as far as the pictures, to balance the page. I like how you made the pictures round – nice effect!

    • When i get home, i Derick will make that change

  • On Book of Luke page, the information at the bottom needs to be translated into Oshie: ” To view this app offline, [1]click here[2] to open it in a new window. Then, bookmark it or add it to your home screen.” Go to Website Languages>Translate Interface, and then start to type in search “To view this”, and the proper section will come up. Everything else is translated – Great job!

    • Done, translated the information. Thank you.

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